“This weeks Friday Fictioneers picture had a mood of a day something went bad. Let’s see what in fact happened in the New York Harbour this day.”
I wrote this story in answer to the following prompt:
Friday Fictioneers – Write a 100-word story based on the Photo Prompt image above by © Na’ama Yehuda
Assassination Day
Staring at the scudding sky, I ask myself why. Not even the Liberty statue can help me through. My orders demand I erase her.
“Heron you came,” she smiles.
I can’t return it. “Vivian, that speck above the harbour is a drone. I’m ordered to assassinate you.”
“What why?” fear darkens her eyes.
“You defected.”
“I left for better pay.”
Our eyes meet. “I love you. Run!”
The drone flashes. Bullets smack the tarmac.
“Run!” I draw my gun and shoot back.
The drone catches fire.
She sprints away.
Bullets riddle my chest. At least I saved her day.
The End
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Lots of action here
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Hello, Neil.
Thank you!
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Dear Mason,
A true hero. Hope she has truly escaped.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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I fear the remains of her life will be spent running.
Thank you for reading, Rochelle.
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I wonder if the drone got her too? Dark and moody, nice job.
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Hello, Tannille
Maybe it did. I fear she’ll be running forever now if it missed.
Thanks for reading.
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What a noble hero, to sacrifice himself for her. I hope she goes on to great things.
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Thank you, Jade.
I hope she does too!
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You’re welcome.
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She met her martyr. A really atmospheric piece Mason.
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She did indeed! Cheers, Keith!
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That is true love indeed.
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Thanks, Elizabeth!
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For a moment I thought that the statue was the drones target, but I preferred your ending
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Wouldn;t put it passed terrorists to use drones to strike the statue at somepoint.
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Good title. It draws in the reader and teases the impending action. The Statue of Liberty is a great backdrop for an assassination.
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Good morning, Nobbin.
Thank you so much!
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The best fiction is based on emotion, and this story is driven by emotion. Well done, Mason.
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Hello, Penny!
Thank you so much!
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Awwwww he saved her in the end. !
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He did!
Thanks for reading, Laurie.
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Great action writing, and a romantic, tragical touch: perfect. Now write the movie. 🙂
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Thank you, GH.
Oh, no, I’ve written too many long pieces that’ll never be read to write anymore. 28 failed novels is enough for me. I’ll stick to short stories.
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I was confused by that initial “her”; I thought the assassination was aimed at Lady Liberty. Sounds like the drone had a greater instinct for self-preservation than your protagonist in the end!
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Hello Elmo.
I can see what that would be confusing. I should have done that different.
It did, the evil flying bag of bolts!
Thanks for reading.
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Love often seems to end in being riddled with bullets 🙂
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Sadly so. Thanks for reading!
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All of this in just 100 words. You nailed it, Mason. Good, succinct writing!
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Thats quite a compliment.
Thank you so much!
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So atmospheric and tense. And a real hero as well. Such a good story and I’m imagining all sorts of continuations…
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Hello, Jenne.
Thank you for your kind words. Yes this could grow for sure.
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such a twist in the end. i didn’t expect that.
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Have to keep things interesting right?
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indeed. 🙂
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This felt like “Person of Interest”. I hope she survived although she will spend the rest of her life on the run. He sacrificed himself for her–a true testimony of his love for her.
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Yes, it would fit Person of Interest well.
I fear she has a lot of running to do.
Thanks for reading!
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You’re welcome. Great story, Mason.
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Thanks again!
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Now that was a twist that caused me to jump outa my seat. Great Story this week. Have a safe one!
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Hello, Bear.
Thank you so much!
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A very atmospheric piece and a tragic romance. Nicely done.
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Thank you so much, Subroto!
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