“A couple years ago I began using poetry to get the pain of failing in my writing out. It was a way to help process it and move on. As this year grows I find it’s time for a new poem as a way to catch up.”
I wrote this poem for the following prompts.
Ragtag Daily Prompt — Inimitable
Fandango’s Flash Fiction Challenge — The picture above from GaudiLab at shutterstock.com.
A True Writing Story
My story edits came
An email of inimitable nightmare
I realise I bring writing to shame
There are red marks everywhere
The editor hates almost every word
They attacked every paragraph
My stomach hurts and my visions blurred
How do I survive this grammatical wrath
My heart breaks in two
I feel my dream beginning to rot
Tears of despair are flowing too
Maybe I should bin the bloody lot
Why did my tale get so much hate
I wrote it with all my heart
Maybe it’s not too late
Perhaps I can even restart
I mean my sleuth is just magic
Her mysteries are nail-biting
What makes it tragic
Is my useless writing
I disappointed my muse
Because you hated my tale
You blew a punctuational fuse
And caused me to fail
So, I had to walk away
To grow until my doubts recede
That was the only way
I could fight back and succeed
Now I sit and smile
As I regale in my sleuth’s pleasure
Come with us a while
Holly Ward’s Investigating her Stolen Treasure
Don’t forget Holly Ward investigates, Stolen Treasures is out on Amazon now!
A recent bank robbery. A saddened man. A coded message. Can they all be connected?
Young Sleuth Holly Ward is determined to help the man. It’s not long before she too comes under assault from a group of dangerous individuals. In the face of intimidation, abduction and even murder can Holly solve the clues and catch the criminals before she becomes the next Stolen Treasure?

Thanks for reading my friends.
There’s more in the Poetry Corner, Poetry Nook, and the Short Story Collection
Have a great day!
I’m glad you recovered from the attack of the editor! It would be tragic if you stopped writing!
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Aww, thanks, Sadje.
It feels special to know I conquered the demons and am now starting to release Holly’s mysteries to the world.
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You’re welcome my friend
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And fight back you did! 👏
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I did, thanks Fandango!
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Yep, it feels like that. I’ve stopped writing altogether now. Just drabbles 🙁
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It can be horrifying being a writer can’t it.
Are you still publishing the book I did the cover for?
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That’s the one that broke the camels back. I’m too depressed even to look at it
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Oh no why?
Can I help in any way?
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I had two people read it one. One only got ten pages in and said it was too confusing, the other really enjoyed it, and told me to trust my instincts. But I’m just confused now
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Damned beta readers! I had several read mine and by the time they were finished they told me they hated everything between them. Including my title! No kidding here in then first chapter between them they’d underlined most of every sentence.
That book was Stolen Treasures the one I just released. I binned their suggestions because I couldn’t face writing a new story to please them. I did edit it a couple times more to the way I wanted it. Then a new editor had a look and aside from the usual grammar, punctuation and such she loved it.
What I mean is – we can’t please everybody. All we can do is writ a story the best we can and ensure we love it. We do that and we will find an audience for it in time.
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Conqueror your fear and pain is big achievement. Keep writing that’s not only for your readers but also for yourself. That’s one of the reason that makes you smile.
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You are so right, Tanvir. Thank you my friend,
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What a fight back, Mason! 👍🏼
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Thank you! I’m proud of me for getting somewhere after almost quitting completely.
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I remember, Mason, you were very dejected. Kudos to you for persevering.
My pleasure.
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I was. I had a horrendous couple years fighting my demons and trying to find my way out of the dungeon of failure. Now, one day at a time I get closer to the dream I once had.
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Ain’t that so inspiring for all of us! May all your dreams come true.
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I appreciate it, thank you!
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👍🏼👍🏼
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