“For the lucky there is always a timely intervention to help just when they need it. Oh, it’s so good to get this out after 7 days of being unable to write.”
I wrote this story in answer to the following prompt:
Friday Fictioneers – Write a 100-word story based on the Photo Prompt image above by © © Alicia Jamtaas
Cabin of Hope
“Salvation!” I could see a roof wavering in my daze of dehydration.
Sweating buckets, feverish and close to passing out, I raised my bleeding hands and crawled.
Hauling my broken body through the bracken, vines and undergrowth.
The cabin was old, mossy; grown into the woods.
I fell at the weather-worn door.
“Can, I help yer?”
Four barrels swam in my vision. Shotgun. “Wa-ter!” my eyes rolled—Darkness.
I awoke in hospital days later.
When recovered, I returned to the woods to thank the man who saved me.
I found the place but the cabin and man had vanished.
The End
Thanks for reading my friends.
There’s more in the Poetry Corner, Poetry Nook, and the Short Story Collection
Have a great day!
Great ending. Yay! You’re writing again
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Hi Sadje.
Yeah! Actually managed to do something this morning! Yay me!
Thank you!
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You’re welcome my friend
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Nice job. 🙂
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Yay me! I managed to write a few words this morning!
Thank you for reading.
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It is a good feeling to do what makes you happy..
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Sure is!
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Great. Glad he recovered.
Perhaps it was God’s work.
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Hello, Anita.
I think it was divine intervention.
Thanks for reading!
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Divine intervention indeed.
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indeed, thanks, Sandra.
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Dear Mason,
An angel in disguise? Or a hermit who didn’t want to be found? Good story. Always nice when the missing muse returns, isn’t it?
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Hi, Rochelle.
I’m so relieved I was able to write again today.
I don’t know why the hermit and cabin vanished. Maybe another story in this one.
Thanks for reading!
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Yay! I’m glad that you’ve writing again. So happy for you. I guess the angels were send in to rescue him. 😉 Great story, Mason!
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I’m glad too! Seems brain is awake again!
Must be angels. Don’t have another explanation!
Thanks for reading, Shweta!
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I hope the writing streak continues! Great job, Mason. Always a pleasure
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Me too! Thanks!
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I hear The Twiight Zone theme. Great little tale.
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I used to enjoy watching Twilight Zone.
Thanks for reading, Tannille.
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Perhaps he was mistaken about the location? Or the water? Or reality?
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Any of the above works. I mean he doesn’t even know if he dreamed of being in the woods or what happened to him.
Thanks for reading, Neil.
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Excellent storytelling! I love stories that leave something to the imagination.
Mason, why weren’t you writing for 7 days?
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Thank you, Jade. I’m glad you liked it.
Thanks for asking. I was lost for words. I looked at the prompts each day and couldn’t find anything to write. Like my brain went on holiday. Fortunately it returned today!
Hope you;re having a lovely day?
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You’re very welcome.
Brains deserve holidays too. Glad yours came back, refreshed and firing on all cylinders. It is a beautiful day here, thank you for asking. I’m finally going to get to plant my new larch tree. Life is good!
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Yup and mine took a holiday without permission lol.
Its been hot and sunny here all day but we have a few summer lightning storms moving in and so its cooler and lovely now.
Larches are such pretty trees. good choice!
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Horrible when the Muse deserts you, but it made a great comeback!
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Indeed, thank you, Elizabeth,
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Plenty of good “show, don’t tell” in this story. I particularly liked “Four barrels swam in my vision. Shotgun.” Great way of telling us he’s delirious and seeing double.
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Oh, I really like this mysterious and intriguing tale! A refuge at the right time. Well done!
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Hello, brenda.
Thank you so much!!
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Reading through the comments, it appears most people interpreted this differently from me. I assumed whoever was after your protagonist got to the man in the cabin. Or he’s out for groceries.
I hate those days when my mind doesn’t want to write. I sit and stare, poke around on the computer…
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I love that everyone had diffeent ideas on what was happening in my story. I like the idea that the man with the shotgun was not the owner of the cabin. That explains well how the cabin owner wasn’t there when he went to thank him. Nice take that!
Thats what I did. Poke at the prompts, mess about in my story folders, and watched a little football. I’m glad it only lasted a week!
Thanks for reading and commenting!
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I’m often amazed by other people’s interpretations of my stories. Some I wish I thought of first.
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Yeah, can be annoying when people interpret better than you did as the writer cant it?
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These guys don’t like any recognition. They just want to live their lives in peace and quiet. Well done, you.
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Yes, I think so.
Thank you so much, Dale!
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🙂 Pleasure.
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Oh! I love the happy ending after the building of tension! Nicely done!
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Hello, Alicia.
Thank you so much!
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Very mysterious! Help was there when he most needed it.
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Sure was. Thanks for reading!
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A story of salvation and at the same time a mystery. Perhaps the hunter was only passing through, who knows. When you mentioned four barrels, I though of rum!! Just me.
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Hello, James.
Maybe he was drunk on rum. Who knows how he got in such a state!
thanks for reading!
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Back with a bang – almost! I’m guessing his saviour was a gun-toting angel.
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Archangle Gabriel the Hunter haha!
Thanks for reading, Keith,
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The first step is the hardest. Maybe this will be take you back on a path to more words!
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Hello, Elmo.
INdeed. its got me going again which makes me smile.
Thanks for reading!
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Mason,
The mysterious savior! Could he have imagined him?
pax,
dora
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Great job, Mason! I suspect ‘divine intervention’… just sayin’. 😉
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I like that explanation. Thank you, Susan.
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Oooooooo
Great last line.
Fabulous piece, Mason! I could see this so clearly. Well done
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Hello, Laurie.
Thank you so much!!
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miracles do happen like this one. he was lucky to be alive.
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He sure was. Don’t know what happened to him but he made it!
Thanks for reading!
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This has a very fairy-taleish feel to it. Maybe his state of dehydration made him connect with some magical universe. I hope you can keep writing and find a solution for your problems (read about it on another comment section).
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I like that idea of the dehydration allowing the dazed mind to connect with another reality.
Thank you for the well wishes. Stupid brain had a fun week off! It seems alright again now.
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Yay, you go! (Cheers you on).
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Thank you I really appreciate it.
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Oh, I love this! A rescuing angel who disappears when the need has passed :). Good writing.
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Hello, Linda.
Thats a great summery. Thank you so much.
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Great story, Mason. This was definitely God’s doing. He dispatched His angel on a mission of mercy.
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Yes it seems he did.
Thank you so much!
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