“This has to be the weirdest fast food place I’ve ever seen!”
I wrote this story in answer to the following prompt:
Friday Fictioneers – Write a 100-word story based on the Photo Prompt image above by © Dale Rogerson
Going Down!
“Joel, why did the propellers stop?”
“Sorry, Mike. We’re crashing into Montreal.” Joel wrestled the controls trying to stop the plane juddering.
“Oh, crap! The people down there.”
“I know!” Joel forced the plane level. The effort leaving him sweating.
“Bounce on that?” Mike pointed to a giant orange ball in a parking lot.
“What? Hell no! That’s the Julep Kitchen. I’ll need a burger if we survive.”
“How can you think of your stomach N—ahhh!”
The plane nose-dived. Joel bounced it between cars and parked on a sports field
“Nice one, Joel.”
“Cheers, Mike. Now for that burger!”
The End
Thanks for reading my friends.
There’s more in the Poetry Corner, Poetry Nook, and the Short Story Collection
Have a great day!
A burger is the least they deserve, I enjoyed how you developed this flash news story
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Hello, Michael.
Oh, how I needed more words today!
Thank you so much, for reading. I’m glad you liked it!
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I thought they were flying the giant ball until the end
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Really? Seems I need to go back and redescribe it some more. Sorry, Neil.
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Not at all, I enjoyed the thought
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Oh thats good.
Thanks, Neil.
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I hope there is a thick shake with that burger. All’s well that ends well…
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Mmm, I could murder a nice icy cold chocolate shake about now too!
Thanks for reading, Tannille.
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Hmm tempting… 😀
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Sure is. Its so hot but wonderful here!
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Cold here…
Enjoy the sun
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Dear Mason,
Some fancy flying there. Hope he enjoys his burger. 😉 Good one.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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I hope he does too!
Thanks for reading, Rochelle.
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Mike knows exactly what he wants 😂
I’m glad that Joel managed to land the plane safely. They definitely deserve a burger. I often find that tense moments tend to increase my appetite!
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Great story, Mason 😃
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Thank you, Shweta.
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You’re very welcome 🙂
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He sure does.
Getting nervous often leaves a person hungry I think.
Thanks for reading!
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Always a pleasure, Mason 😃
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Love that you searched for what this is, Mason 😉
Glad he managed to not crash into it!
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Hello, Dale. Thanks for giving us a wonderful prompt image,
I always like to have a little research so I can base my story on a little fact.
Glad you liked my tale and thanks for reading!
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Glad you enjoyed it, Mason!
And great that you did take the time. Google images is a great tool 😉
I did!
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I wish I’d thought to do an image search. I did using regular search queries through google.
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Ah… I imagine you would have found it much quicker – next time!
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I undoubtedly would. Oh well I discovered what julep was in the process so its not all bad.
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It’s an interesting beverage, that is for sure…
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Hmm, it sounds pretty good. Better than the poutine for sure!
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No, no, no… the poutine is lovely.
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Unless you like your fries crispy!
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Yeah. No crispy here…
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Well I guess I could have the fries seperate so i can try it.
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No. That is all kinds of wrong. There are some made with crispier fries which you might accept. The point is to have the gravy hot so the cheese melts into long strings… but, unfortunately, when the cheese comes straight out of the fridge, this is nary impossible. This makes me laugh as you buy curd cheese off the shelf, where it is room temp but restaurants are obliged to refrigerate it. Oh well. I make my own, then!
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That is weird. If its a shelf product then it needn’t be stored in a fridge to this chefs way of thinking. It completely ruins the concept of the dish if the cheese doesn’t melt right doesn’t it.
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It is stupid. But all in the name of avoiding lawsuits, I guess.
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For sure. the food standard agency must be appeased or no food at all.
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Exackery 😉
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Now thats a great spelling!
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😉
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Fun one all of the way, Mason. I would have liked to see the bounce if he chose it.
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Hello, Jade.
That would be a spectacular bounce!
Thanks for reading!
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You’re very welcome.
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Phew, that was close – I hope they didn’t get a parking fine!
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I wonder if they’d double the usual fine for plane?
Thanks for reading, Keith.
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It sounds as though Joel has done this before! Entertaining story, Mason.
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Hello, Penny.
It appears his planes are always falling out of the sky lol
Thanks for reading!
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After all that trouble, a full stomach can do them a world of good~
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I think so too.
Cheers, Larry!
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Mason,
Woohoo! That was an exciting ride. And thank God for the burger.
pax,
Dora
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Hello, Dora.
Glad you liked it. Thanks for reading!
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All’s well that ends with a burger.
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Indeed, thanks Nobbin.
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It would indeed be a disaster to crush the burger stall. Some good forward thinking by Joel.
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Sure would.
Thanks for reading.
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They both sound pretty cool about the whole episode. I think my stomach might be the last thing I’d be thinking of under those circumstances.
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Hmm, dratted 100 words. No space to do a story properly.
Thanks for reading, Sandra.
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Great parking, now do they deliver the burgers or do they have to go and fetch them. Where is the service when you need it? I don’t the pilot was too phased, maybe this is not his first crash.
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I think he crashes regularly lol. He’ll have to walk across the car park for the burger too!
Thanks for reading, James.
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He has strange priorities, that one.
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Yes he sure does!
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I hope they don’t order Tang with their burgers 🙂
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Me too, Tang is nice alien he doesn;t deserve to be minced and eaten.
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A large drink would be my choice – and not orangeade!
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I’m with you!
Thanks Elizabeth!
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it must be one hell of an experience. glad they survived. 🙂
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Me too, thank you!
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Oh, that was quite funny! As my navy pilot sweetheart used to say: “Any landing you walk away from is a good one.” Oddly, I live near an airport, and I can see this happening… Rofl!
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I think your pilot is correct there!
I have an airport just on a mile away and an airforce base just a close too. I always wonder if I might get a plane in the courtyard one day!
Thanks for reading.
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At one time, we lived 100 yards from the end of a runaway for the air base…. and, it was right after 9-11, so touch and goes around the clock for 28 days straight… very scary that was… lost every piece of glass we had in the house.
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Thats terrifying and expensive all in one go!
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Yes, we lost all our fine china from our Gr. Grandparents, and all of our wedding glass. Our insurance at the time actually covered replacement at 2/3 actual value.
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Thats such a shame. Its not about the item its that your grandparents held those items isn’t it.
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yes, it was. I could have replaced the pattern… but I just didn’t. We used the money to move away from the flight path.
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I think that was wise to move house. No sense staying where planes are going to keep destroying your home.
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It was more about getting sleep, too. Then, hubby got laid off when his company downsized after losing so many in one of the towers. A very bad time for our country, but we pushed through.
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That was a nasty time for sure.
G;ad you got through and moved on okay.
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At least he has his priorities straight. Entertaining story and I loved the dialogue, Mason!
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Thank you so much, Brenda.
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Nice take. Glad he gets his burger.
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Thank you, Athling!
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Whew! I’d say they had earned that burger! 🙂
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He sure did!
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🙂
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That takes fast food to a new level! Great little story! Well done 😊
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Haha! Yeah sure does.
Thanks for reading, Fleur.
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