“If I ever have a first date, I imagine something would go horribly wrong. At least in the UK I don’t have to deal with hurricanes!”
I wrote this poetic-story in answer to the following prompts:
Friday Fictioneers – Write a 100-word story based on the Photo Prompt image above by © Dale Rogerson
A Stormy Date
There by the sea
The couple shared some tea
with a cuddle and kiss
The storm couldn’t miss
Rumbling from nowhere
It reaped destruction and despair
Through wind and tidal wave
The café went to its grave
Structures, trees shattered and fell
Blue chairs, deck flooded to hell
When the storm left, the sun arrived
Had the sweet couple survived
Embraced beneath the café wall
They’d resisted the hurricanes maul
Hand in hand they climbed free
gasping at the storms devasting spree
Now, they shared a loving kiss
having survived Zeus’s abyss
Unlike stormy weather
Their love would last forever
Thanks for reading my friends.
There’s more in the Poetry Corner, Poetry Nook, Short Stories. and Short Stories 2 and Short Stories 3 tabs.
Have a great day!
Dear Mason,
A disaster with a happy ending in verse. Nicely done.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Good day, Rochelle.
Thank you so much. It was fun to write in a different way today.
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Exploration is half the fun of this challenge. Hint: it doesn’t even have to be fiction. We inherited the name “Friday Fictioneers” from the originator.
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Sure is,
Hmm – a hundred word news article could be fun for a prompt such as this.
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Such a sweet tale. I admire people who can write poetry in rhyme 🙂
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Hello,
Thank you so much. Rhyming is such good fun. Making a story with it too, is even better! Thanks for reading!
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Lovely story in poetry.
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Thank you so much, James.
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Good for them to survive the storm.
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Absolutely. Thank you, Sadje.
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You’re welcome 😊
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Very well done Mason, true love can spring from extreme circumstances!
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Hello, Iain
Thank you so much for the accolade. I’m glad you liked it.
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A sweet tale so nicely told!
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Thank you so much!
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What a lovely uplifting story in rhyme. You very beautifully brought out the beauty of human existence, Mason.
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Nice to read a happy ending for a change!
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Thank you so much, Elizabeth.
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Well now, that’s what I call a jolly good tale!
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Hi Dora
Thank you so much.
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You’re welcome!
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Good poem, Mason and with a happy ending to boot! Excellent.
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Hello, Jenne.
Thank you so much!
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This stormy date ended on a happy note. Good one, Mason 🙂
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Hello,
Thank you so much!
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You’re welcome.
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Very nicely done. I especially enjoyed the last line. Love weathers the storm!
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Hello Brenda, thank you so much!
I got that line first when in inspiration mode and built the story toward it. Love how it works sometimes.
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Unforgettable beginning and happy ending. Perfect 🙂
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Aww, thank you so much, Linda!
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That was ace! What a fine poem, that makes me green with envy, poeticism is tricky tricky, brilliant stuff
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Aww, if I can do it, I know you can.
Thank you for reading and for the fine comment!
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That couple have a charmed life by the look of things!
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I think so, thank you, Penny!
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Love conquers all… beautiful!
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Aww, thank you, Susan.
This was interesting doing a story in poetic fashion.
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truly enjoyed this poem. i’m a sucker for happy ending. 🙂
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I’m glad you enjoyed it. Thank you for reading!
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Fun story, cute ending 🙂
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Thank you so much!
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You’re welcome!
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Loved the Zeus reference, an innovative way of describing a storm.
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Thank you, Tannille.
I was racking the brain for something metaphorical and then Mr Lightning bolt appeared and thought would do the trick. Glad you liked it.
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Aw, sweet! And a good story to tell the kids.
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Indeed, thank you so much for reading!
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So creatively presented- stormy date.
It ends on a happy note & that’s great 🙂
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Hello, Anita
Thank you so much!
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The form fits their love and luck. Very romantic, they will weather any storm.
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Hello.
Thank you for reading.
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I like a happy ending and this is a beauty!
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Hello, Keith.
Thank you so much!
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Oh this is lovely. A disaster that had me worried but they survived ! We both saw a love story here.
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Hello, Laurie.
We did, thank you so much for reading mine!
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I enjoyed the way the visual unfolded in your poem.
Of course, a happy ending is always icing on the cake.
Nicely done, Mason. I enjoyed this very much.
Have a wonderful weekend,
Be Safe 😷 … Isadora 😎
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That’s so kind of you. Thank you very much, Isadora.
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Absolutely wonderful, Mason!
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Hello, Dale.
Thank you so much!
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Well done. Writing a rhyming story can be a challenge. I especially liked “Through wind and tidal wave /
The café went to its grave”
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Hello,
Thats a great compliment, thank you very much!
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Things can only go from bad to verse 😉
Lovely take on the prompt.
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Nice one,
Thanks so much!
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Lovely poem! ❤️
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Thank you.
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And through it all they emerged intact. Love will conquer all. Nice poem, Mason
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Hello, Michael.
Thank you so much!
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