“A complaint: Friday Fictioneers give us 100 words to tell a story about the above image. I could have written a thousand just describing this Chinese street! Haha! Oh well – I did my best. I hope you like it.”
I wrote this story in answer to the following prompts:
Friday Fictioneers – Write a 100-word story based on the Photo Prompt image by Brenda Cox
Death By Chilli
The Trilby hat was Detective Roback’s trademark. He stood a foot taller than anyone within the narrow, colourful, streets of china town. He scowled while searching for Meng. “Gah, it stinks of greasy egg flied lice and rotten fish around here!”
“You go then!” said a woman wearing a hippy bandana.
Roback lunged beneath a red sign into a Chinese food store. “You’re under arrest, Meng.
“I do nothing.”
“You killed Foo with your nuclear-grade chilli powder.”
“Prove it!”
Roback pinned him down and removed a sachet of chilli from his jacket pocket. “This’ll match that found in the victim.”
The End
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Clever! Is killing with chili an offense?
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Thank you, Sadje.
Hmm, probably not an offence unless you know it’ll kill people and feed it to them I reckon.
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You’re welcome! Probably then, if they know.
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I think so. As a chef I know restaurants always put out a disclaimer warning of the danger of their hottest offerings. So, that’s then the eaters fault if they get sick or worse. So, it can only become a crime if a person deliberately uses chilli as a weapon.
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It would a crime that would be difficult to prove.
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That is for sure. the detective would have to find strong evidence of motive and proof the murderer knew the chilli would kill the victim too.
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Sometimes too store in the mind when you’re writing a whodunnit.
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Funny and violent, what’s not to like!
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I’m glad you liked it.
Thank you so much for reading!
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Dear Mason,
Aw the fatal chili. What a way to go. Nicely done.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Hello, Rochelle.
I chose chilli as even as a chef I cant abide by the fire in my mouth lol
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Wouldn’t take a very strong chilli to do away with me! Fun take, in a dark way.
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Me either! Thanks for reading, Iain.
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Nuclear-grad chili powder – I love it.
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Haha! I thought that fun. Thanks for reading,
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There’s no messing about with Detective Roback! Great story, Mason.
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I based him on Detective Ward in my lost mystery series. Made it fun.
Thanks for reading, Dora.
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Well, if I have to die I guess chili would be a pretty good way to go 🙂
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There are definitely worse ways, huh. Thanks for reading!
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The spice trade isn’t dead. I hope there is a toilet near by. 😀
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Indeed not. The toilet might be useful too! Thanks, Tannille.
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Mmm, where can I get some of that? I reckon I could handle it 🙂 Fun!
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Might want to check the additives first though, lol.
Glad you liked my piece.
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Chilli – the new weapon of mass destruction. Love it!
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Hello, Sandra.
Thank you so much.
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That was fun. Still smiling. I’ll be careful of chilli in future, especially if there’s someone called Meng around!
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Hello, Jeanne.
Meng was a bad guy from a story in a series I wrote and was forced to abandon. It was nice to get him out again. I chose Chilles because I can’t stand food which means a fire extinguisherThanks for reading.
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Hmmm… Now that’s something I’m going to add to my list 🤔
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Oh? You going to commit murder by chilli lol
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I never said that 😉
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No you didnt. I was being silly on your comment is all.
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Fun story! Of course, loving the chili powder.
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Thank you so much.
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Well, you have to go someway. Death by chili’s a lot better than some other options I’ve seen.
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Indeed, that might not be so bad. Thanks for reading.
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Ha! Death by chilli… sometimes I think my partner is trying this 🤣 well done. A clever idea for the prompt. At least the detective got his man!
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Hello, Laurie.
Thank you so much for reading and commenting. Your partner likes the nuclear grade chilli does he? My advice stir in a yogurt fire extinguisher!
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Oh! Great idea 🤣
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Thanks, this chef does not enjoy his mouth catching fire!
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this story is so hot it burns my eyes 🙂
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I knew I should have put a disclaimer on that post! Thanks for reading!
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Entertaining story and I love chilli powder as the murder weapon. =)
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Hello, Brenda.
Thank you so much for reading and commenting.
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I always suspected that chilli powder could be used as a weapon even in small doses. Fun read.
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Hello, James.
Made strong enough it must be lethal I reckon. Thanks for reading!
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Ha! Great stuff, death by chilli eh? Not on my watch
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Thanks, I’m glad you liked it.
That’s it you keep an eye on that chef!
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Chilled by chili. Neat idea!
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Hello, Penny.
Thank you. The only problem was chilli is more Mexican I should have gone wasabi lol.
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And wasabi is more likely to kill, I think.
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I always think it looks lethal anyway!
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